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It's hell with out you. by ~Scout-07-16:iconScout-07-16:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


Through These Eyes I Do See Hell
My Mind It Holds Me like A Cell
Until I See You I'll Feel The Burn
For It's Your Soft Touch I Do Yearn.

It's your love that will douse the flame
with out you life just wouldn't be the same
My Heart It's now yours to claim
For In my heart, written there's a name

From my Former Glory I have fell
You found your way through my shell
You've seen all my flaws and all weaknesses
Yet our future together it grows and flourishes
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To Hold You In My Arms After You're Away...
To See You After So Long, I Had So Much To Say
Then Comes the Night, Alone I Sit Along Side The Moon
Anxiety Fills Me Knowing We Must Part So Soon
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Author's Comments

I've decided to keep working on this... I don't need to be in Love to write Love Poems ^^

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:iconemmalili:
~EmmaLiLi Jul 2, 2009, 5:53:48 PM
EXPAND, of course, because its good. C:

ps. i read your journal, it wasnt a waste of words C:
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~Scout-07-16 Jul 3, 2009, 5:00:02 PM
OH good! I've been really emotional lately... It's really... unfortunate...

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=Dellanine Jul 7, 2009, 9:09:30 AM
EXPAND!!! I would love to see more!

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Mood: Approval ~Scout-07-16 Jul 7, 2009, 9:40:12 PM
Oh YAY! :D ^^ For the record: I writted for Kayla Tessier... Cause she lives like... .000005 Million Miles away... :(

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~EmmaLiLi Aug 6, 2009, 10:42:24 PM
this is good, i havent talked to you in FOREVER XD
i like this, your lucky you can write good. i had to write SIX poems for english and they were terible XD
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Mood: Longing ~Scout-07-16 Aug 12, 2009, 6:16:56 PM
*I'm lucky I can write well...*
If you're going to be writing at least make sure you're going to be doing it proper! :D <333 That was my first step, learning proper grammer... I still mess up occasionally or sometimes I just don't care... I like the "Dot, Dot, Dot" I use that all the time but it's not proper... I just like the way it looks... It's as if I'm thinking. :D <333

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*AleriaCarventus Aug 12, 2009, 8:35:02 PM
This is sweet and the rhyming reminds me of a song. It's too bad you and your girlfriend don't live closer together.

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"Hope is the denial of reality. It is the carrot dangled before the draft horse to keep him plodding along in a vain attempt to reach it."
'Are you saying we shouldn't hope?'
"I'm saying we should remove the carrot and walk forward with our eyes open"
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~EmmaLiLi Aug 13, 2009, 3:38:50 PM
thats really cool, the ... how its like your thinking. i like that.
i hope i went okay, i probably get my result back soon... D:

its only year nine though C:
:D :D
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=Dellanine Sep 2, 2009, 3:45:57 PM
Wow. You've done a good job with this :D

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